https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/ Revision Work of Working Draft 3 This page is introducing who I am and where I come from. https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678340 144678340 This page has little red markings. https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678341 144678341 This page has a lot of revision work. You can tell that I thought a lot about what I wanted to say and how I wanted to say it. I read my writing aloud, and saw the many mistakes that were in my writing. https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678342 144678342 This page also has a lot of red markings and revision. I had a hard time with my sentence structure and how I wanted to word things. https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678343 144678343 This page I had a hard time with how I wanted to word things as well. I often found myself repeating phrases and/or sentences. I read this aloud and realized that I could move sentences around to make it sound much better. https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678344 144678344 The markings that were on this page was about my sentence structure. https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678345 144678345 This page had minor problems. The problems that were on this page was I could've used better words. For example, "the worse the abuse would be" is now "the worse things got". https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678346 144678346 This page had little markings. The markings that was on this page were mainly spelling mistakes. https://bbarbee1.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoID=144678347 144678347